همراه اطلاعات

همراه اطلاعات

همراه اطلاعات

همراه اطلاعات

نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس


نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس

In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits.
What is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?

In my opinion, an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same rights and the same opportunities. I completely agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society.

Education is an important factor with regard to personal success in life. I believe that all children should have access to free schooling, and higher education should be either free or affordable for all those who chose to pursue a university degree. In a society without free schooling or affordable higher education, only children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the best learning opportunities, and they would therefore be better prepared for the job market. This kind of inequality would ensure the success of some but harm the prospects of others.

I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with people’s freedom to succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that people lose their motivation to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. On the contrary, I believe that most people would feel more motivated to work hard and reach their potential if they thought that they lived in a fair society. Those who did not make the same effort would know that they had wasted their opportunity. Inequality, on the other hand, would be more likely to demotivate people because they would know that the odds of success were stacked in favour of those from privileged backgrounds.

In conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between equality and personal success.(260 words)

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نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس

Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.

On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational.
Users, or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes.
From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context.
Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane.

However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks.
Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing.
Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends.
This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console.
The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.

In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.(258 words, band 9)


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راه صحیح گسترش دامنه ی لغات

دوستان عزیزی که مدام در مورد چگونگی افزایش دامنه لغات خود می پرسید، لطفا با دقت مطالعه بفرمایید.

خواندن و حفظ کردن لغات با استفاده از کتاب هایی مثل ٥٠٤ و غیره از لحاظ میزان مفید بودن و درستی تکنیک های آموزشی چندان توصیه نمی شوند.

در آموزش اصولی و مفید، بهترین روش گسترش دامنه ی لغات با استفاده از خواندن آن ها در متن ها و کتاب هاست. نکته ی مهم این است که باید معنای کلمه ای را که بلد نیستید، در فرهنگ لغات/Dictionary جستجو کرده و حتما کاربردهای مختلفش را در جملات چک کنید، یک بار بخوانید و خود شخصا با نوشتن مثال هایی – بر اساس آن چه در دیکشنری دیده اید – آن لغت را استفاده کنید.

وقتی لغتی را در دیکشنری جستجو کردید، یعنی چیزی در موردش نمی دانید، و این گونه یاد می گیرید که آن لغت چطور و در کجا استفاده می شود. دانستن معنی لغات بدون این که بتوانیم آنها را به صورت صحیح استفاده کرده و به کار ببریم هیچ سودی ندارد.

در مورد نرم افزارهای یادگیری لغت پیشنهاد می کنیم که دنبال چیزی باشید تا لغاتی که خودتان جستجو کرده اید را برایتان به صورت منظم یادآوری کند تا آن ها را مرور کنید؛ و نه این که روزانه تعدادی لغت کاملا جدید را برایتان بیاورد و شما سعی در حفظ معانی داشته باشید.

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نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس

In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.

The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.

However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry. They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one. Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents. While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.

In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.(band 9)

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۷ روش بد استفاده از اصطلاحات کنایی Idioms (بخش اول)

شاید بیشتر از هر موضوع دیگری درباره ی استفاده از اصطلاحات کنایی سوال پرسیده شود. سوال هایی مثل:

    آیا استفاده از این اصطلاحات نمره ی مرا افزایش می دهد؟
    از کدام این اصطلاحات استفاده کنم؟
    چند اصطلاح در Speaking به کار ببرم؟
    آیا از این اصطلاحات در Writing استفاده کنم؟

از این مبحث آزمون آیلتس بیشتر از هر بخش دیگری برداشت اشتباه شده است. دقت داشته باشید که در صورت انجام هر کدام از اشتباهات ذکر شده در این بخش و بخش های بعدی، ضرر بسیاری خواهید کرد.

در این بخش و بخش های بعدی، به بررسی ۷ روشی می پردازیم که استفاده از این اصطلاحات می توانند باعث کاهش نمره ی شما در بخش Speaking و Writing بشوند.

اشتباه اول: استفاده از اصطلاحات کنایی در Writing Task 1 Academic

در Task 1 بخش آکادمیک، شما باید یک سری اطلاعات، نقشه و یا یک پروسه را توضیح دهید. برای این کار هیچ احتیاجی به استفاده از اصطلاحات کنایی نیست چرا که شما در حال نوشتن متنی آکادمیک هستید و استفاده از این عبارات اصلا مناسب این امر نیست.

اشتباه دوم: استفاده از اصطلاحات کنایی در نامه های رسمی

در Task 1 بخش General، از شما خواسته می شود تا یک نامه (رسمی یا غیر رسمی) بنویسید.

به کار بردن این عبارات در نامه ی غیر رسمی، مادامی که اصطلاحات را به شکل صحیح استفاده کنید، اشکالی ندارد. اما استفاده از آن ها در نامه ی رسمی مناسب نبوده و برای این کار نمره از دست خواهید داد.

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